Incompetent Warrior of an NTR Game

Osten says:

It’s shit with no character development for anyone.
And why are the revenge so stupidly extreme?
When cheated by a girl the best revenge is to move on from her and live a happy life making her regret her decision dearly, not turn her into some public toilet!
And the real hypocrisy lies when MC creates an harem, like how are you better yourself!?

me says:

First chapters were decent, but later (20 chapters) they became completely unreadable. I don’t understand what happened, where happened and with who. Shitty MTL

Hakdog34 says:

This feels like a cheap sht copy of “Inside an NTR Game as a Former Hero”.

• The writing is bad… Felt like the dialogues are awkward. There’s no use blaming it for being an MTL. There are novels that are Mtl’ed but do not have this kind of awkward writing.

• The NTR’ed heroines are only relevant for the regret element of the plot. They don’t advance the plot nor do they get stronger.

• Romance is non-existent and revolves around the smut. MC can’t flirt. Smut is awkward too it. Did the author read too many hentais?

• Character Development? Only thing I see is that the new heroines spread their legs for the MC while the ex-party members. That’s all there is to it personality-wise.

• The plot premise isn’t anything unique but still interesting. Pity that the execution was sloppy. MC is overpowered too. It’s hard to grasp and appreciate it because the writing is bad. I even had to lower my bottom-line.